Crested Posted February 28, 2003 Posted February 28, 2003 I made this poem. I don't know if it's good or not. What do you think? [u][i]Intentional heart ache[/i][/u] [i]She looked at me with her button eyes, I couldn Quote
Rowie-the-Pooh Posted February 28, 2003 Posted February 28, 2003 How sad! :cry: That's a really good poem!! Good for you!! :D :D :D We want more!! :D Quote
Crested Posted February 28, 2003 Author Posted February 28, 2003 [i][u]Hell in a cell[/u] I sit here in my cage, Sharing it with 5 others. Can someone take this ache? Who even bothers? What ever did I do, To deserve this pain? This day I got through, What about tomorrow? The sun rises once more, But my wounds are too sore. I can Quote
Crested Posted February 28, 2003 Author Posted February 28, 2003 Oh and please don't copy theese anywhere. /Crest Quote
Crested Posted February 28, 2003 Author Posted February 28, 2003 K: I've been trying to search the nopuppymills.com -page, but I can't find any place where I can post my poems. I've been there before too, but haven't found any poems. Mabye I'm just blind...? Quote
mouseatthebusstop Posted February 28, 2003 Posted February 28, 2003 I think the first poem is deep and makes you think. That is what the Puppy mill sites need. :( if it can change one persons mind it is worth it. The second one was alright but your first one hits the right places Quote
Guest Anonymous Posted February 28, 2003 Posted February 28, 2003 The chineese crested - Left = powderpuff Right=hairless The chineese crested is such a cool breed. I love the way they look like little horses. Quote
Prairie_Gurl Posted February 28, 2003 Posted February 28, 2003 I think those poems were great! They really make you think about what some poor unfortunate dogs have to go threw. Very Sad!!! :cry: I think it's a great idea to post them (especially the first one), it certainly deserves it. Great job, and keep writing!!! :wink: Quote
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